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Worth the wait...

and what i mean by that is by sitting through it to get to the "sucky sucky" scene. damn freakin hilarious, good job! :D

Wow....and yet...

I have an idiot sister and brother in law who still say that it was a good movie because there were lots of explosions. I am not kidding, and he has a government job and makes 200k a year. Life is stupid.

eh.......

short, funny, but just...adequate.

So awesome :D

Simple, funny, nostalgic and just plain cool to watch, awesome job!

A much needed pill

Thank you for making these cartoons, it's just what i need after being cheated out of my money by my idiot professer

Needs less salt

I watched this twice. Once normally and once on mute with no subtitles, like i do most animations that get alot of praise just to double check on something i might've missed. Now i could spend alot of time criticizing and point out the staggering amount of flaws that were in this flash OR i could hand out suggestions. I'll do both but make the former quick. Stiff animation, LOOOOONNNGGG talking scenes, sleepy depressing music and emotionless setting.

Now as far as my suggestions go, stop writing and use storyboards. Writing kills animation. Watch cartoon network right now and find one of those god awful shows they have on right now. They all have writers. After that go watch ren and stimpy or some of the old looney tunes cartoons. They had storyboards. See the difference?

Now for the animation itself, 2 things. #1, why does every single anime have the same looking people? I can see where the influences are coming from (easily noted are dbz and avatar) for both style and look, but really its tiring to see the same people and the same movement all the damn time! And #2, make it an steady flow because its speed is slower than a turtle takin a poo in a shoebox. I understand that this is supposed to be a serious anime flash but most animes fade out because of that flow (or budget). One anime that i saw (if i could pronounce it or even spell it, i'll get back to you on the name) had alot of action in its first episode and got cancelled the next episode. Why? It went from good paced action to very very very SLOW paced drama. Not cause of drama but because it was SLOW.

Now for the big one...the voice acting. It made me glad i have a mute button on my computer sometimes because of situations like this. No offense to the voice actors.....actually, scratch that, with much offense because thats how you get people motivated to do better, when their balls have been busted and bleeded out. Voice is one of those things that will instantly kill any movie or any performance and this is one of those cases. My suggestions is to go watch Pride and Glory or Gran Torino or The Punisher (2004) and watch the emotion that is on display. It's not enough just to show seriousness but to know WHY you're serious. It's just like the blues, it's not enough just to go on stage and blow on a harmonica, you need to know why the blues need to be played.

One Last suggestion, get some better music cause holy crap THAT was one of the reasons it was so hard for me to sit through the first 2 minutes alone from the rest of it.

5/10 For style and effort.

Lawl

Its so true, achievements mean nothing, and no one knows about them except you unless you tell people, which makes it sadder, great job and keep up the good work :D

I <3 Rhtym (i cant spell)

damn thats a good melody you have, DONT EVER LOSE IT!

Nearly had a heart attack!

lol this made me laugh so much i couldn't believe it!

Sad...

Very fluid animation, story was funny and sad at the same time, loved the sound effects you used for when she used drugs, but thats also why this didnt get a 10, there were very little of them and theres no background music, but overall pretty damn good! :D

I think I'm gonna like it here!!

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